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"So Heartless(Remix) feat Remy82"
A Remy82 and MR. BYRD Collaboration


  MR. BYRD:


Heartless - Kanye West


***We been around people who are heartless.....nevertheless hurt our heart, kill our souls and rip our minds apart....the greatest stress....


Let's do it Remy.....

In the...heat of the night,behind deception's closed doors
We would flare tempers in the heat of the moment
To understand the justification of love that -was- so- unjust
Who could we trust if we couldn't trust one another
Funny how friends times beneficial advantages equal to dysfuntional lovers
From ....friendly converstations having the greatest sex under the covers
But shawty, we started out as friends...how we get to this level
The level of one's hate was served on your plate
I'm just trying to be a man and find ways to understand
How the hell did your own self consious get out of hand?
Where do we go from here??
Can we...get back in gear, or will this poem will continue to shed tears?
I need to see the sight of clarity
Because this shit is just not fair to me

  Remy82:

You gave...good conversation
Your words oh so persuasive
Built up my motivation
To give more than a friendly affection

Now you got my mental spent
From all these words that you spit
But there's one part I didn't get
And that was you wasn't trying to get serious with this

Emotions all in a dissaray
Because I could've sworn I didn't hear you say
That I could give you my body but....
My heart I had to throw away

Emotional disconnect
But your "principle" you crave to keep erect
Gave my spiritual and mental
Yet my physical is what you chose to select

As if the rest bares no value at all
Though you act as if there all priceless when you call
And when you stroke my walls
All over again my heart falls

  MR. BYRD:

Good conversation??
I gave you my heart
Put you in my circle of trust
Funny how a few words can lead into lust
You...wanted me to grasp your undivided attention
I stayed committed and loyal...but you just didn't get it
Maybe I didn't fit the bill
Maybe I never could embrace what I call dysfunctional love
You're right, a emotional disconnect
So you went out with your friends, blasting vicious lies
Telling them that I ain't shit...
Now I'm Luther Vandrossing in Circles
Dazed out and confused
Defaced out of my mind with misconstrued half-truths
So..how the hell is your heart going to fall
If you stroke "we need to move on" on my wall

  Remy82:

Yes my heart falls
Cause your words are so charming
How you can get me back in your bed so easily...
Is dangerous perilous and alarming

And just like a fool
I fall back into your arms
Not even giving a damn
How this emotional rollercoaster
Is causing me harm

But so I will break free
From all your manipulation
Setting my mind free from
Your lies and FRUSTRATION

Sick of wondering when you will
pick of the phone and "Say My Name"
Sick of wonderin when I can give myself to you
And not feel ashamed

I am so addicted to you though
That is something I must confess
Addicted to a man that is transparently heartless.

  MR. BYRD:

So this is it huh?
Are we at the end of the road?
I guess you saying it's time to part ways
Breaking ties is hurting my eyes with your deceitful lies
And I'm sorry but my actions speak louder than words
So if your heart falls, it's because you didnt listen to your heart at all
I didn't play with your mind...I try to lift it up
Is this why we got off track leaving you on the emotional wheel?
THEN HOW THE HELL YOU THINK I FEEL?
Why would I pick up the phone if hearts are disconnected
Rain-clouded by your fogged envison
You telling me you can't sleep...
Telling me I manipulated you from your own decisons
You laid down and told me...THIS IS WANT I WANT
Don't sit and front like this wasn't the truth....
And the heartbreak clashing escladed all in one roof
So if you gonna confess, then address the rest,
You brainwashed my mind and let me so HEARTLESS..

SO..HEARTLESS

SO...HEARTLESS
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (07:31 PM)
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Date: 07/04/09 (11:42 PM)
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  ButterflyDream
07/08/09 (05:57 PM) 
This was hot,one of the best collabs that I have read in a minute.I love the two side elements where you both were communicating with each other,yet still failed to grasp the other's point of veiw.And sometimes thats the way it goes in relationships....speaking from your point of veiw but not really connecting with each other in communication.I loved it.

  Drea s
07/04/09 (10:58 PM) 
DDDAAAMMMNNN THE TWO OF U REALLY DID YALL THING WITH THIS ONE.....IM REALLY FEELIN THIS PIECE......GREAT WRITE

  krazy
07/04/09 (10:06 PM) 
wow.... mr.byrd you already know i think your hella fealthy but this was off the freaking hook! i loved your word play! and everything else! but remy82 lil mami you got skills too.... for real you did your thing! ya'll damn near brought tears to my eyes! keep em coming... a fav.. and 10 stars from a poet called krazy

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