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"So Long Sanity"
  by g00n


You've slammed the door to a million cells
And I..
just..
want to..
YEELLLLL!!!!

You turned your back cause you can't face me
Did..
You..
Think that would..
ERASE ME!?!

Crippling my sanity and tearing out my heart
Leaving me to waste hoping the suffering will stop
Im holding on to a picture of myself
and I...
CANT SEE MYSELF!!!

You send a smirk as you passed through the door
Stopped to step on our love that was laying on the floor
I cant seem to breath..
ANYMORE!!!!!

Now i'm..

F

A L

L

I

N G

Into a state of misery and my emotions are unraveling before my feet
Unable to shake the image of your face, haunting me in my sleep
Shouldn't of jumped so quick to be with you...
Should of..
LOOKED BEFORE I LEAPED!!!!

And i'm frozen....

FROZEN

My blood is circulating with this hate
Pumping to a heart, broken by a mistake
This sanity of mine feels so fucking fake
YOU'RE CHANGING MY FATE!!!!

and I'm
changing...

Rearranging the endless pieces to this puzzle that is me
Putting them together so i can be what I want to be
This choice that's been made I am forced to agree
I want to close my eyes so i can't see the pain
But its...
SOMETHING I MUST SEE!!

Walking over to the door I see you're gone
Don't know how my love did you wrong
But i cant let you take away my life
so its...
SO LONG!!!!!

SOOO LOOONG!!!!!

*SLAM*...


Stricken - Disturbed
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Date Submitted: Apr 01, 2009 (01:24 AM)
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  J3LLYB3AN
06/26/09 (08:46 AM) 
first off the song and scribe went together hella perfect and second this was really strong and powerful hun you really let out all emotions and made them collide to become a perfect scribe

  ~*~itti~bitti~...
04/07/09 (02:59 AM) 
i loved this write. its def. going on my favs list && i cant wait to read moree. 10

  JokerJay
04/06/09 (07:28 PM) 
I fuckin' love the song and the band. And this write fuckin' blew me away. So much emotion flowing from these words. Truly amazing.

  KINGLO
04/04/09 (06:01 PM) 
! VERY AGREEE WITH B ROSE VERY DEEP IM JUST SIIT N ON THA EGE OF MY SIT READ N

  CinCity
04/04/09 (02:55 AM) 
dayum yo this was definitely a amazing scribe i love ur way with words, u definitely are a poetic artist to me goon, no doubt, im defnitely subscribing to u

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