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"So Much More"
  by WIZ


If you could see through me,
like I could see through you

What a different world would be,
if all our dreams came true

No more judging your mistakes,
No more judging mine

We would rise above the hatert,
and flourish with divine

Imagine if emotions ,
were never in the way

We could speak our mind,
like our Heart and Soul do say

And make a different tommorrow,
with a brighter brand new day

The world would be as one,
as we step up to the plate

And turn each devilish figure,
from every ounce of hate

To what our mission must be,
and help them all to see

That in this world of sin,
we must rise up to be free!
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Date Submitted: Dec 29, 2008 (09:03 AM)
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  BlessedOne
07/02/09 (05:23 PM) 
Very encouraging my sister. This may not be the world that we live in, but we can make it our reality. I'm with you.

  1225
05/04/09 (10:51 AM) 
IM SO GNNA FAVOR THIS POEM!! i jux wish da world would see the real me sumtiimes, and reading this poem can free me...

  Nubian Sistah
02/02/09 (09:19 AM) 
Wow you written this one flawlessly. Very inspiring and uplifting. God bless you for sharing this one.

  Yas
01/28/09 (07:40 PM) 
well this most certainly is very uplifting love the positive vibes that just seem to radiate from this :) ~Yas

  me-me
01/10/09 (04:12 PM) 
okay ma im digging this for real a great write

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