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"so she LIKES you huh"
  by krazy


i was 16 years old when i fell in love with you
a hand in glove is how it was when i was with you
i droped out of school to be with you every second of the day
because niggas is trying to holla as you would say
i had your son and gave you my life
all for the hope of one day me becoming your wife
not as if i was doing anything that a wife didn't do
i cooked i cleaned i took care of your seed and every night i fullfilled your needs
but after two weeks of you fucking around i'm not wife material
and your leaving me for some bitch that you found....
oh but i forgot that she LIKES you!
like after everything that we've been through... i don't some how...
it's funny how your seeing that now
after me giving up everything for you... but it's cool
i'm very glad that she LIKES YOU.. i guess it's better then having some one love you...
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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (10:16 PM)
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  Margherita
07/23/09 (01:45 AM) 
That is deep. Every woman goes through that at least once in their life.

  smily
07/18/09 (03:57 AM) 
YOU JUST KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND DO YOU. THE SAME WAY YOU GOT THAT BROTHER YOU CAN GET ANOTHER, WELL DONE

  Wheaty G
07/18/09 (01:39 AM) 
damn you should never leave someone you love for the one you like he will learn the hard way good write 10

  angeleyes1
07/18/09 (01:34 AM) 
very good love the deep emotions flowing in this here keep them words flowing much love

  Gifted Pen
07/18/09 (01:34 AM) 
This is the story of so many women. And it's like no matter how many times I hear it, it feels like it's new because, like your poem, theres always so much passion behind these expressions. Thank you for sharing.

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