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"So-Called "Dad""
  by Blessinda


she sits in the corner, not wanting to move
because her body is in shock from this horrible news
the news she just heard of her so-called "dad"
the life he showed them was not the only one he had
deacon by day, junkie by night
he constantly put ona front like he was living right

she always saw something in him, that others couldn't see
she knew her mom shouldn't be with him, it wasn't meant to be
but what was she to do, only being a hild
little did she know, the truth would come to the light afterwhile
slowly but surely, people began to see
that deacon vines wasn't all he cracked up to be

he had a problem, that was solved with a fix
it put him in a state of confusion, so his family he dismissed
coming home later and later, not caring if his children saw
he did it for years, it instilled fears, until finally he pulled the last straw

his wife had had enough, she couldn't take it anymore
now once ad for all, she is walkign out that door
she is tired of always worrying, tired of all the pain
of styain up late, wating for a mate who was just playing games

so now it's final, her parents are getting a divorce
she always knew that one day her mom would make the right choice
though it took a while to see, she has finally come to realize
that the man she fell in love with had her living a lie

so what is she to do, being put throgh all this turmoil?
it's so overwheling that at times all she can do is cry
she calls her best friend who is always there
hoping to get encouraging words that let her know God won't put more on you than you can bear

so as she sits in the ocrner
she begins to ponder on days gone by
the days when she hada daddy who she tought would never lie

Some dad he turned out to be.

10:44pm
3/22/07
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Date Submitted: Mar 30, 2007 (06:15 PM)
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Date: 04/09/07 (01:57 AM)
Author: Skittlezz
Poem Title: Learning to Forgive:...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  NeubianGoddess
06/23/07 (02:56 PM) 
Great Write ma!! Very emotional and personal...but you laid it down oh so well!! Gots to give ya 10...though you deserve even more!!

  MiaMia
06/23/07 (02:47 PM) 
very emotional...ma you really tore it down right here. so many times this is the case...sad but true though. Good Write!! gots to get ya 10 stars ma!!

  Poohbabi2010
06/14/07 (06:25 PM) 
Thats fucked up i feel u nice write!!

  mzchristene
06/14/07 (05:39 PM) 
That really good. I could see myself writing something like that, I can relate. good job

  poetic rymes
04/17/07 (07:51 PM) 
i really like the way you wrote thiis it shows alot of detail ans emotions this troly is a nice write

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