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"Somethin New"
  by Mouse13


No more sheading of the tearz, my eyes have been dried
from heartache and pain from family & friends
you walked into my life and showed me something new
my eyes are estranged my heart is confused
always told to be smart, dont show your fear
i cant quite put my finger on it but
its simply something about you
that makes me lose my breath
cant help but smile
mind spinning with thoughts
can you stay for awhile?

But see things are always good at first
and then seem to roll down hill
you told me to put my trust in you
you'll do no harm
im trying my hardest to believe in you
But my mind just wont connect with my heart
the law says inoccent until proven guilty
so ill stick by ur side until
you prove me otherwise
the evaluation of my spirit elaborates
on the presence of my heart
i threw away the key now i just dont know where to start

im giving you my all
my most precious gift
so just promise me you wont run away with it
ive known of people to rush to say i love you
not quite sure on what it meant
but i wanna take my time to find out
Love is a virtue not a habit
So dont lie to me keep it a hundred percent
sometimes the truth hurts and i promise i can handle it
im not putting this all on you because mistakes could come either way
its a 50/50 process to make a relationship work
so at the end of the day ill roll up my sleaves
and get my hands dirty because baby i think your worth it.
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Date Submitted: Jul 26, 2009 (10:03 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  DiVerseLife
08/27/09 (09:37 PM) 
NICELY DONE

  Dutchmisses
07/27/09 (10:11 AM) 
this sounds like my ex. i hope urs workd out better cuz mines went down the wrong road. So I say keep up the work you know you got talent

  Tiku
07/27/09 (06:45 AM) 
I love the pain and the expectation in thepoem.The flow is amazing.Just carry on.You have talent.

  big josh
07/26/09 (11:33 PM) 
wow yet anothr hot drop, nice job :)

  booker
07/26/09 (10:11 PM) 
you put alot of emotion into your poem and effort 9 points keep it up

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