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"Something like a Big Deal"
  by Luvlee


I declare that I am something like
A Big Deal
I am ever increasing in faith and zeal
I thrive in pressing towards the mark
My father in heaven How great thou art
It seems the more I try to figure out me
The harder the prize seems to be
I am nothing without Him
But He is still everything without me
It’s really funny how we go about life so aware
But when it comes to separation its like we simply don’t care
Where is our standard of living?
Where is the true love that we were once use to giving
I don’t know
Is it lost between the perceptions that went to deep
Or the realities that cut our cores
Is our faith truly lost forevermore?
Conquests felt won because you write
But inside your inner spirit still fights
What a cheap thrill
And unlike you through it all
I declare that I am still something like
A Big Deal
Wrapped tightly in Jehovah’s arms
Refusing to let go and weather the storm alone
Because I don’t have to
In His word I suffer rebuke to be reproved
Unscathed by the burning fire
To live Holy is continuously my living hearts’
one and only desire

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Date Submitted: Nov 03, 2009 (11:31 AM)
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  Chinazy
11/16/09 (10:52 PM) 
Gr8t write gurl keep dat pen on da paper!

  Emmortal Essen...
11/16/09 (11:59 AM) 
Wow...You definitely let your ink flow through this piece. Not afraid to shine and show your love for Christ at all. Definitely we are nothing without him, but with him we can travel any road and get to where we want in life. If we fall don't be afraid to ask for his guidance...Nice Scribe..Never Let Your Ink Run Dry..Stay Blessed & Encouraged!!

  vostirah
11/16/09 (11:59 AM) 
..jah be praised 4ever.. ...wrapped tightmly in jehovah's arms... i love your flow gal.

  ButterflyDream
11/13/09 (06:59 PM) 
Very determined resolution and celebration rule this piece.nicely done:)

  Tragic
11/12/09 (03:02 PM) 
i love this so much! mostly because its about the love of my life!!! GOD! haha. love it though

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