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"Killing The Rebel"
  by Chaotic Virgo




Ill never know if it will be ok
With so much love drifting away
Out of site and out of mind
Poetic versus returned in kind
I welcome back the heart shaped scar
Traveling along the edges of hurt
Marred by impatience
Kept by dreaming
Distracted by the voices screaming
Contemplating life's true meaning
Soaking up the mess
From a heart left bleeding
Taken by the side that knows
The hole that hurts
When the cold wind blows
That icy frost keeps the blooms in holding
Denying life the beauty of showing
Dormant and waiting for the seasons growing
Instead of winters cold hearted knowing
I deny myself the breath to breathe
I won't allow myself the time to grieve
Just stand and watch you as you leave
Praying to God for a brief reprieve
The kinder side… the romantic rebel
Takes the pain to a higher level
Holding tightly bleeding heart held high
Laughing and crying at the sight of sky
The heartless side… in deep concentration
Smiles at the rebel so full of elation
Knowing the outcome experience driven
The folly of love and the chances given
So am I the fool?
Or am I the killer?
Let love rule?
Or be the sinner?
Ill be the exiled
The still frozen river
Until I'm worth something
Something to give her
The cold air is diminished
The sun is the liar
The killer the truth
And the rebel my fire
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Date Submitted: Oct 13, 2009 (10:04 AM)
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  Solid
11/17/09 (07:40 PM) 
very nice :)

  tngrl
11/09/09 (09:54 AM) 
okay seriously... maybe you won’t respond to my messages or my photo comments or even my poem com...
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  Jazzy Storm
10/22/09 (05:44 PM) 
i like this even better after hearing it. you are awesome. you can hear the hurt in your voice. perf...
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