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"Just freestyle (sounds bad but will be fixed)"
  by C-note ron




I feel real cool like i stepped from the shade, I feel real smooth like I stepped through a phase,I feel real loaded like I just pulled a raid,here i come lookin crazy dawg are you afraid,I have the ace shawty and you got the spades? let's go make a trade, I smooth real deal,I ain't hestitant to kill,keep on talkin why we ridin I"m a bust ya off da wheel, just look at my cali fresh grill,If i was rich the pic would cost five mill-Go and take cover nigga dis ain't a drill, Wait up whats the--Deal,So fast to get past,but still last fo dat cash,don't be rash,irashional,keep collected thoughts,I keep corrected plots, now do you see a red dot? I keep it fresh as it runs around da clock,what you tryin da hide no need to block,I ain't crazy I don't do da rock,Better watch out for unexpected shock,I saw a wierd homie sittin in the street EATIN CHALK?! steady movin as i do my g walk,I do my talk cool as i enter my tight ride, I"m smooth dat foo' a joke now you pic wich side,I come ridin 100 miles now watch da tide, askin ME fo a drink lady dat be aight ,How you know you get beat you ain't know you ain't tried,Next thing you know yo ass end up fried,go and turn around "Up yo poeple just died"yo ya burned up cali fresh fried served sucka with mustard on a busta,I got to get a dusta, to come whip off my shoulda,I know i turned it and made it even colda, watch out herre come a boulda, nigga I told ya,not to mess with the fresh, the best I ain't from da rest,just look how I dress,I got no stress, No chips on my chest,Just look at my vest,this ain't a test,I'm like a mad scienest with ryhmes I manifest,I got the holy crest,don't you Know I know the best?,I ain't making mistakes based upon my typing, this is all ryhming with bad timing came you finding,I know you lying.


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Date Submitted: Aug 30, 2007 (08:59 PM)
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  $leek $laughta...
09/01/07 (03:09 AM) 
yo u nice u spit off da dome if not u should get on it

  C-note ron
08/30/07 (09:02 PM) 
I made a few adjustments to my poem so i would not offend my family while saying it out loud

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