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"sour cherry"
  by drybaggij


imagine it
a penny
no hole


(I mean I do have a soul...)


flipping toward it's goals

rolling under tables flipping over fences
away
from greedy appendages
residing
in a diamond mine
for fun


(now think about that one...)


fine
but
you'd think the penny worthless
and wouldn't be the first
it's
rising among precious jewels
fools would agree
but this penny
brown
a lil dented
demented
just a cent
it
is the only one in the mine that can be spent as is
dig?


(Am I really the only sour cherry on the fruit stand?)



Sour Cherry - The Kills
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Date Submitted: Mar 11, 2009 (12:12 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/30/09 (12:07 AM)
Author: drybaggij
Poem Title: rotten egg

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comment icon  COMMENTS (11)
  Lexxi
07/23/09 (01:45 AM) 
Ten it Is! i really liked ur ending too

  ddubb
04/21/09 (07:06 AM) 
This was good. I like the idea a lot. Good poem, sir. Cheers & Peace Across

  XPERIENCE
03/11/09 (10:29 AM) 
i loved that.....period.. the ending really took it home for me.."fine but you'd think the penny worthless and wouldn't be the first it's rising among precious jewels fools would agree but this penny brown a lil dented demented just a cent it is the only one in the mine that can be spent as is dig? (Am I really the only sour cherry on the fruit stand?) "

  --->QUEENPIN O...
03/11/09 (10:18 AM) 
i must agree wit the masses on this one...this is one of ur dopest joints J...thought provoking and 100% YOU...me likey!!!

  Cornfed
03/11/09 (08:54 AM) 
Strong statement and flow! I liked this alot!

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