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"Space Troopers"
  by Candice:Lieutenant.Fuck.Off!.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Neverland by H.H. Holloway


Brooklyn Basement - Tequila Mockingbird

*Smooches*
Good morning love
I pray
that high speed connections
can connect us briefly
for a morning chat
from this Brooklyn bedroom
seeing as how
I've never told you
I adore
the
martian within

...you...

come coat
me in red fairy dust
fairly dusting my dreams of
us sipping mojitos
sitting on Saturn's rings
swirling fingers
around rims of shot glasses
chasing away
space debri
formally known
as our past

---let's have a blast---

playing
ring around the galaxy
sliding
across milky ways
attempting
to steal home base
tumbling
head first into big dippers
still chipper
dusting off knees
& re clasping your Orion's belt
making
haste like Mercury
rushing
to moonwalk on the Sun
we'll have fun
& when we finally decide
to come back to Earth
snuggled on top of blankets

stargazing

still giggling
about being space troopers
I'll point to the north star
whispering
"You still shine brighter in my eyes"

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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2008 (11:23 AM)
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  mz_April
09/21/08 (05:36 PM) 
damn im really diggin the way you put this whole poem. the write was awesome fave!!

  Tpoet
09/21/08 (08:35 AM) 
amazing write picture perfect love this song 2

  porkchops
09/21/08 (06:14 AM) 
when you start talking bout red fairy dust i was thinking do not sniff no but this is an out of this world way to express ones love

  --->QUEENPIN O...
09/14/08 (11:49 AM) 
come coat me in red fairy dust fairly dusting my dreams of us sipping mojitos sitting on Saturn's rings swirling fingers around rims of shot glasses chasing away space debri formally known as our past <---CAN I BORROW UR BRAIN FOR ONE DAY?? WTF!! DOPE

  Ms. Sincerious
09/12/08 (10:30 AM) 
im diggin the concept, and you did it perfectly... wish i could relate to the sentiment , but this was beautiful nevertheless..

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