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"Speechless"
  by Poetic Aquarian
  - This Poem is a response to the poem "El Residente" by poundcake


Let me put you on a pedistal, for you're a goddess in my eyes
Everything about you is a perfect 10
Baby where have you been all my life?
Wife material, you are that and so much more
Adore you I do, that much is true
Forever is our title with our guide as the bible
For me will you be the mother to our family?
And grow old with me?
That's what it's supposed to be between me and you
You put my mind at ease, you are the peace that I have dreamed
Bringing me serenity like a stream or a river
Beauty unsurpassed and a love everlasting
With God's guruantee of satisfaction
No longer have to be asking for it, now I got it
Got locked inside my heart this time, forever a love that is mines
Now time stands still and happiness is planted in my garden
Evil is defeated, lust has been conquered, and my heart no longer hardens
Thanks to you my love, you take away my very breathe
And I know you'll be the one I have left when all others fail
Words fail me at times when I bleed the love from my heart
But I know you understand me and love me too
And for that and so much more I love you

Wo Ai Ni Poundcake

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Date Submitted: Sep 13, 2007 (05:49 PM)
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  Yas
11/29/07 (11:19 AM) 
beautiful writeand u got my fav john legend song playing too...that right there deserves en starz for sure...i love the way this flowed n its so damn sweet got me sittin over here blushin lik u wrote it for me lol

  Allana
11/07/07 (08:43 AM) 
beautiful. this is what every Lady wants to hear. ( and they also want you to mean it) great job. keep writing. 10stars love peace and poetry

  Mariah
09/20/07 (10:19 PM) 
OMG!!!!!! I LOVE THIS POEM MAN I AM ADDING THIS TO MY FAVORITES MAN KEEP WRITING PLEASE

  Milkyways Gurl
09/19/07 (09:13 AM) 
this is so beautiful it brings tears to my eyes i love how ur words flow together it says that u really know how to put ur emotions in to it its very affectionate thanx for writing it

  unforgivenange...
09/19/07 (08:49 AM) 
this is beautiful, really beautiful. I love the flow of words and the emotions behind this piece. The deep love and affection, the wanting and security. Thanks for sharing. Awesome job

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