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"Speechless"
  by Pete Alma
  - This Poem is a response to the poem A Closed Mouth Don't Get Fed by Snugasaglove


Speechless

I’m so sorry
forgive me if I stare
but it’s rare that I meet a woman
no disrespect but I’ve wasted words
and heard distasteful slurs
from mouths of those that looked the part

Again, forgive the line of questions
but I’m exasperated with guessing
thinking this one is the One
nevertheless, just one of many
silly babies’ mamas upset
at boyfriends who rob their goods in hoods

So I apologize for that too
Because I was once that fool
who played trick for treats out-of-season
with no reason other than bragging right
I’m trying to let you know who you’re dealing with

So, if I appear a little nervous
or over-saturated with questions
I’m simply trying
to remove any assuming or suggestions
on both our parts
and hearts cannot be taken lightly
and if things do not work
let us leave with healthy psyches
because understanding is paramount
and let’s leave no doubt as to who we are
PEOPLE that deserve respect….
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Date Submitted: Oct 19, 2008 (05:03 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/19/08 (06:07 PM)
Author: Snugasaglove
Poem Title: Flustered and Flattered

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comment icon  COMMENTS (6)
  mindigoblue
12/10/08 (07:24 PM) 
Bravo poet!! Speechless you say? Well this was certainly more than a mouthful I'd say. I love the way you brought this to a close as well. Something that many loose sight of in the heat of the moment often causing irreparable damage. You really summed this up very succinctly.

  RedLoveSong
10/28/08 (03:26 PM) 
Thanks for breaking it down from another point of view. Great response.

  Jody
10/19/08 (10:16 PM) 
Loving the male perspective... agree with the last line. Nice.

  Ordained2Chang...
10/19/08 (09:28 PM) 
I enjoyed the response because females tend to think a man is disinterested because they take their time... people do deserve respect

  jerl
10/19/08 (08:06 PM) 
Alrighty then guy, yhay's what I'm talking about. You gwone dan, tell it like no one else could. Anybody that has Snug talking and laughing has truely done his job well. Keep that pen blazing.

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