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"Spiral"
  by AR-15


Psychotic powers, taking full and unbearing control
Over a mind that sends signals to my body to locate the untraceable soul
The everlasting search pumps venom through my blood
Simulating an animal waiting to be unleashed, and a survivor of the flood
2007, marked the end of one, the beginning of another
A soft and weak minded human being has died
and here came the birth of a solitary but ever so powerful young brother
I have taken the full 360 for the better, not the worst
The ones who rejected, despised and betrayed me, will fall first
What goes around comes around
For the spiral of soul searching contains no safety bounds
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Date Submitted: Jan 30, 2008 (12:07 AM)
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  Sunkissed25
11/06/09 (06:44 PM) 
Nice positive drop here!! No weapon formed against me shall prosper...that comes to mind after reading this.

  Variator
11/06/09 (03:06 AM) 
sweet vocab on this one very descriptive

  lyricalmessiah
08/26/09 (12:18 PM) 
umph that was great expression i could really feel that really loved that

  Ladyoflyrics
06/18/09 (06:41 PM) 
well dayum....over a mind that sends signals to my body to locate an untraceable soul..this piece though short was wonderful in discovery of self...the warning at the end the ones who rejected, depised and betrayed me will fall first me...so much truth in that one line..pen on point here..10 * writer perfect 10 for self awareness check up..

  Wolfie
12/21/08 (11:45 AM) 
wow brother. i liked the mood of this one. the rhymes were unique too. Good write brother. keep it up

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