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"Spiritually Speaking (what i been waiting for)"
  by PnutButta


Like Noah you came to my rescue
Provided shelter from torrential rains
Vanished the nightmares, kept my dreams afloat
Vanquished the doubts, resolved the reservations
Reassured me that I exceed qualifications for true love

Like Moses you lead me away from depression, deprivation, separation anxiety
Despite my apprehension, you relentlessly support me as we journey through uncharted waters
a life boat...not a scapegoat
Cause and effect...
With your patience, comes my alleviation
Doctor and patient...
Prescribe and I will abide

Fountain of youth, so inviting,
Immerse, diving into my rebirth
Rejuvenation!
The temptation of a true heart, mind and spirit
Tremendously alluring
These once wilted Rosetta petals are now re-hydrated, invigorated
Extended stems, rooting, burrowing into the soil which we have cultivated
Towering in a garden of blessings
Radiating showing others the truth in the light

I thank the Lord for the table placed before us
Now a feast of good and plenty
All because you gave me a chance
Thank you...My Good Samaritan

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Date Submitted: Jan 09, 2008 (02:14 PM)
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  Preeminent Pri...
05/27/08 (10:09 AM) 
I loved this!!! I too was feeling the biblical references... I love your choice of words, especially your ending...

  heaviness
01/13/08 (06:18 PM) 
a write of knowledge both studied and current -- excellant display of talent

  fafou
01/12/08 (04:58 PM) 
words i messed up on big bang* ahead*

  fafou
01/12/08 (04:58 PM) 
i liked the words you used and erythn was well put together...the Bible touch was nice too...but i don't know...something about it didnt really captivate me.i found myself trying to read ehad to see where the big baand wouls be.didn't find one..you slipped on this one but still did a good job as alwaysz..7stars. =]](was i too honest?)

  Midnight_Dream
01/11/08 (08:58 PM) 
Very nice. I'm like the word play. Definitely loving the biblical references! Well done!

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