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"S's and H's"
  by Poetik assasin


Im lost inside her confidence.
her flawless lips've got me slipping in and out of consciousness,
and it's only common sense her thoughts are as soft as a conscience is.
SSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Im more caught up in the words that her lips say
than the curve of her hip's sway.
her swerve swinging this way and that
she grins and then laughs
Im twisted like damn!
this sister is bad!
miniature stature with a mind so like mine.
her eyes make me unravel with mindless babble about
timeless travels and skylines...
I'm nervous...
my palms're sweaty..arms heavy and walk jelly. Im not steady,
off balance...
but all feeble imperfections fade in the cream of her complexion
I dream of her perfection,
flaws and all...
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Date Submitted: Apr 22, 2009 (03:55 PM)
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  Ms. Sincerious
04/24/09 (04:12 PM) 
THIS WAS FUCKIN BEAUTIFUL and your flow was ever so present.. despite the structure you posted it I was still able to completely catch the flow of this.. I lovvved this piece.

  blackandmild19...
04/23/09 (08:54 PM) 
damn man, i know the feeling bro. this piece is real. its hard to let someone know how you feel. very deep 10 stz and a fave

  --->QUEENPIN O...
04/22/09 (04:53 PM) 
I dream of her perfection, flaws and all...<---that has got to be one of the most beautiful lines i have ever read...like whoa...really in awe of that....

  lady jada
04/22/09 (04:43 PM) 
short poem dat sayz so much and the confidence and lips and hips ..all me lol ten starz and a fav!

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