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"Stained"
  by Royal Deity


My life was like a dirty rag; so full of stains.
These stains were a constant reminder of my past's pain.
Toiled and tormented by too many past lovers
Staining and piercing my heart with bitterness and scorn.
Never felt relief since the day i was born.

Tears of pain stain my pillow case.
Embedded there for the rest of my days.
Burdened by rep of "Quick Fix of the Day".
I can't change the past.
I can't make it go away.

Then you came...
And these stains just faded away.
My heart opened up, and my fears were relieved.
I can love again.
I can breathe again.
I can live again.

It feels good to be clean
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Date Submitted: Aug 10, 2007 (04:51 AM)
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  Neurotically I...
11/03/07 (10:45 PM) 
this was masterfully written...i love the analogy...nice concept..

  esti16
08/22/07 (07:01 AM) 
excellent analogy. the metaphor really puts the poem's meaning into perspective.

  debread
08/22/07 (03:03 AM) 
wow.so well written. its beautiful. its so deep.. i like it. excellent write.

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