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"STANDING STILL (1)"
  by *JazISweet*


Soon to be like a solid rope chain
The blood starts to harden as it flows through my veins
Another feeling of pressure begins to thump in the crevices of my brain
Nerves twitching while my body stiffens from the undesirable pain
Dwelling here in my very own emotional blood as it crawls in the drain
Inching its way down the sewer cracks where life will form as if it were grain
Nurturing my own wounds as I sit here alone & listen to my body complain
Greiving from the wants and needs I am not supplied with to maintain

Seizures start trembling my body as I hit the cold floors surface while my ears loudly rung
Twitching uncontrollably as I bite down on my pale abnormally expanded tongue
Incapable at the moment to free myself from this temporary torture that has begun
Lucidly my mind drifts & has its way with my thoughts as the air no longer sits in my
Lungs.....

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Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2007 (11:11 AM)
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  cyrux
06/23/08 (04:38 AM) 
jeez the write up is fantastic and i love the way you use your rymes on it it compells me to emulate you.........what do you say?

  --->QUEENPIN O...
01/14/08 (03:33 AM) 
DAMN MAN THE MIX OF THE EMOTION IN THIS JOINT PLUS THAT PIC IS PHENOMENAL

  TS
06/17/07 (12:00 PM) 
"lucidly my mind drifts & has its way with my thoughts as the air no longer sits in my lungs..."..wow!!! i luv it!!! smh.well done!

  QueenV
06/15/07 (03:21 PM) 
whoa.. some serious stress or something going on here.. very descriptive emotions here. perfect touch with the pic!

  nywizdom
06/15/07 (12:42 PM) 
Damn jaz, this was bananas! yo, that last sentence to close it...hot! "Lucidly my mind drifts & has its way with my thoughts..."<-wow!

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