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"Staring""""~~~~""""""
  by EboneeEyes


The moon runs from the sun
In search of me
At night I see the moon running
Quickly hiding behind clouds
Steady pacing to its endless destination
Running away from the sun’s happiness
In search of my sympathy
In search of me

Feeling down from his dark surroundings
Not knowing that he holds a light of his own
Not realizing the sun was there
To bring out his brilliance
Instead, like a sinner, he runs into the darkness
Lost and not knowing where to go
So he’s there every night…
Searching for a way out
But runs away from happiness

Searching for me…
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Date Submitted: Jan 29, 2008 (08:32 PM)
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  Guey2
10/31/09 (01:34 AM) 
Wow. Most definitly poetic. The imagery and metaphorical comparison's are nice. good work.

  The Clinician
10/25/09 (12:25 AM) 
Deep, soulful and compassionately written rolled up into one outstanding and tasty poetic burrito. Yum. Keep dat food for thought coming my poetess. Peace and much love to ya.

  BlackTearDrops...
06/24/08 (09:42 PM) 
this is a very good piece right here my VA queen, but sometimes, darkness can be the greatest thing in life, in the dark things change, its beautiful in a ways, 757 Rep, VA stand UP!!!!!!

  ۞ F1 Wes...
06/16/08 (12:17 PM) 
let me find out you're another writier of the "darkness" but it's a bad thing!-- Girl- embrace the drakness and find out the wonders of what may be hidden in the shadows! You and I need to do a collabo on it- so I can guide you even deeper! This was good !

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