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"Stating My Position"
  by MoJoNes


I’m not one hundred percent sure why I’m feeling this way

I’m not even sure what message I’m trying to portray

I do know this feeling inside of me I must obey

Speak about my true feelings inside and end the delay

Forward the memo my heart has to say

Implying that I’ve fallen for you sounds like a cliché

But its truly love because my heart didn’t sense any foul play

I even went as far as giving a self survey

I told you I loved you, do you remember that day

You where too good to be true, I even questioned if you where gay

So relieved you’re not caz I would have been in a dismay

I accepted the fact we’re not together but in my heart you shall stay

And I pray to God from my life you’ll never stray

I hope your feeling for me haven’t changed since I’ve been away

But you knew I had some personal demons to slay

I hope this poem shows the feeling to you I’m trying to convey

And you should know it’s real if I put it on public display

Giving you my heart on a golden tray

And I hope me putting this out there was ok
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Date Submitted: Apr 05, 2007 (07:58 PM)
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  Deandra
03/19/08 (02:02 PM) 
really good write mah. the poem had a nice flow to it and the concept was on point. Im glad he wasnt gay too lol. nice job mah u get 10 stars from me

  Tie
10/08/07 (06:37 PM) 
very nice and i can relate right now 10 stars

  jerl
06/05/07 (10:43 AM) 
Very good! I love it when people say they had demons to slay. That means they had a battle with the devil and came up victorious. Those that lost the battle don't talk about it, those that win, GOD makes sure they tell the world. HE makes things so good you just have to tell somebody. Amen!

  Chastity
06/02/07 (12:20 AM) 
Dis is beautiful ... makes me think of something i'm dealing with right now. Nice... real nice!

  ShuuuShu
06/01/07 (04:55 PM) 
Awww gurl, this had such a nice concept to it and loved the way the whole poem flowed! You got some real skills up in here!

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