Poem: Stay On Track, - by Young Deeq

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"Stay On Track,"
by Young Deeq

I'm just a plain boy,
Trying to keep my life on track,
At a steady pace,

PS- My first Haiku! LOL! wtf im like doing so many new types of poems XD

Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2008 (05:49 AM)

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Date: 09/23/08 (04:50 AM)

Author: Chainz.

Poem Title: Stay On Track

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Chainz.

09/23/08 (04:48 AM)

lmfaooo! ima do a haiku response but for real i agree wit chops n ghost it 5.7.5 yurpp 10 stars none the less

porkchops

09/21/08 (08:00 AM)

yowhat ghost said it suppose to be 5-7-5 syllables but you can fix this easy by just taking my out nonetheless nice poem haikus are difficult

'x'GhOsT'x'

09/02/08 (08:22 AM)

Well since this is your first try .. I'm going to give you a 10 .. The syllables are wrong though .. you did .. 5,8,5 its suppose to be 5,7,5 good job though

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