Looking over the fence At apples parading the grounds Weighted down
Now
Ripe food for the... Worm Ingesting its innards And leaving it whole As before
But(t), Distasteful for others to eat
Jody:
Like lady bugs Not their type of treat Maybe for some The les-dotted ones
But(t) For the worms A delectable treat A switch from dirt-y eats To five star meals The splitting halves And devouring cores With tantalizing juices Leaving seedlings Making Granny Smith's
Until Honeybee catches sight of what's over the fence, he sees, he likes Buzzing over with stingers at attention-ready- always A connoisseur of eating out Just ask the flowers
Worm feeling the pressure of the one rolling up on dubs- 20cenimeter wings with the candy coat to match the yellow AND black! Poor wiggly thing, far from ever hard (needs that blue pill) Unlike his competition Who's now locked on his target Ready to seize his moment Poor Worm, On the verge of regeneration Breaking moment
N/A:
Bugging over apples bottomed Causing premature brown spots to form While smaller fruit becomes abhorred Found unattractive for this 'flaw'
Harder to score Fruit swinging high above in trees Tight bodied, developing flavor Picked for its taste more carefully
Worms watching
As over the fence tight buds blossom organically flowers giggling in the breeze as stolen apples would be given for free
lol great vocabulary and mechanics in this lol....very metamorphical, yet obvious in this peice...i enjoyed it greatly...it was humorous yet constructive...excellent...10 points...keep the pen flowing =)
LOL i know what i got outta this but my mind could be wayyyy in the gutter...but if this is about what im thinkin..LMAO then lawd yall some fools.... and Let me just say ummm Yeah i agree with that..But Make Sure HE Dont be Eatin them Rotten Apples... He may get sick.. loved this ladies..very creative