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"Stealing Apples"
A Jody and N/A Collaboration


  N/A:

Bonita Applebum (Instrumental) - A Tribe Called Quest
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Looking over the fence
At apples parading the grounds
Weighted down

Now

Ripe food for the...
Worm
Ingesting its innards
And leaving it whole
As before

But(t),
Distasteful for others to eat

  Jody:

Like lady bugs
Not their type of treat
Maybe for some
The les-dotted ones

But(t)
For the worms
A delectable treat
A switch from dirt-y eats
To five star meals
The splitting halves
And devouring cores
With tantalizing juices
Leaving seedlings
Making Granny Smith's

Until Honeybee catches sight of what's over the fence, he sees, he likes
Buzzing over with stingers at attention-ready- always
A connoisseur of eating out
Just ask the flowers

Worm feeling the pressure of the one rolling up on dubs-
20cenimeter wings with the candy coat to match
the yellow AND black!
Poor wiggly thing, far from ever hard (needs that blue pill)
Unlike his competition
Who's now locked on his target
Ready to seize his moment
Poor Worm,
On the verge of regeneration
Breaking moment

  N/A:

Bugging over apples bottomed
Causing premature brown spots to form
While smaller fruit becomes abhorred
Found unattractive for this 'flaw'

Harder to score
Fruit swinging high above in trees
Tight bodied, developing flavor
Picked for its taste more carefully

Worms watching

As over the fence
tight buds blossom organically
flowers giggling in the breeze
as stolen apples would be given for free
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Date Submitted: Aug 17, 2008 (10:37 PM)
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  Jenesis
09/01/08 (03:36 PM) 
lol great vocabulary and mechanics in this lol....very metamorphical, yet obvious in this peice...i enjoyed it greatly...it was humorous yet constructive...excellent...10 points...keep the pen flowing =)

  Rukiya Faizah
08/23/08 (10:19 AM) 
I was sitting here laughing like "oooh, they are nasty and comedy at the same time." This was an enjoyment.

  (Floetic~One) ...
08/20/08 (02:18 AM) 
the creativeness here iz outstanding! both of you did a wonderful job puttin this together. great flow and visual... i really enjoyed it. 10 starz

  XPERIENCE
08/20/08 (12:52 AM) 
LOL i know what i got outta this but my mind could be wayyyy in the gutter...but if this is about what im thinkin..LMAO then lawd yall some fools.... and Let me just say ummm Yeah i agree with that..But Make Sure HE Dont be Eatin them Rotten Apples... He may get sick.. loved this ladies..very creative

  *Tha Scorpion*
08/18/08 (10:06 AM) 
Damn ya'll really trying to make a brotha think this morning huh? This does take my mind to a different place indeed.

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