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"STEP"
  by AmateurNoMore


You think my line of sight is headed your way
but it's beyond what you can envision;
Trying to initiate with confidence
only to have it sliced with knowledge;
STEP
Been there, done that
and play the same board as you
except you have to remember that I, Queen
conquers your pawn;
STEP
Thinking your words can have an impact
but I'm not on the same playing field
as what your apprised to;
I battle with you until the significance you once felt
is no longer valid;
STEP
How does it feel to be conquered?
Your words like mirrors so you're looking at them yourself;
Job well done in proving once again
that the game is simple...transparent and you simply have to
STEP
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Date Submitted: Jun 24, 2009 (12:09 AM)
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  Cornfed
08/01/09 (11:28 PM) 
Clear, strong and cleaver! Three points to your talent!

  TheUltimateCur...
06/27/09 (11:33 AM) 
I already told u! Absolutely brilliant! "Amateur no more" 10*

  A.C.H.
06/26/09 (10:43 AM) 
I'm loving the chess reference. This write was very raw. Much luv on this piece! - "the inspired one"

  Tiku
06/24/09 (02:11 PM) 
Written very intelligently.The words are well set and meaningfull.

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