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"Still Hurts Like The Day You First Left"
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Still Hurts Like The Day You First Left
by Jean Roy

I’m loosing my grip
And it’s tearing me up inside
My mind betrayed my heart
Unable to figure out the truth from the lies

It’s been about a year
Since we've went our separate ways
And still six boys later
Your still the one guy that I think about at the end of each day

I never knew
It could be this hard
To get you, out of all people
Out of my heart

But the three months
That we were together
Still have an impact on me
And have changed me forever

I sometimes wish
I could go to the past
And rewrite the wrongs
And make sure our love would last

And if I
Could press rewind
I’d make sure to keep you happy
This time

I never should of let another boy
Take you away
But I guess I wasn't doing my job as a man
To give you a good reason to stay

Maybe it was my fault
That we didn't work out
But the truth of the matter is
You are still someone I feel so strongly about

I guess this is all hitting me now because when we broke up
You broke all the promises you once kept
And now that I have bumped into you one year later
It still hurts like the day you first left

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Date Submitted: Dec 09, 2007 (09:21 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 04/05/09 (07:06 PM)
Author: Teddy Graham
Poem Title: Why does it still hurt

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  HARLEMFINEST
05/13/08 (06:20 AM) 
OH MAN...THAT WUZ SERIOUS..I'M LIKE WOW....I FEEL DIS WAY FOR MY EX-FIANCEE..DA ENDING HAD ME"I HAVE BUMPED INTO YOU 1 ONE YEAR LATER ..IT STILL HURTS LIKE THE DAY YOU FIRST LEFT"I DON'T WANNA GO THROUGH THAT 1...U TOLD A STORY WITH YA POEM..SO DA READER CAN ENVISION UR WORDS..I WUZ FEELIN THAT..I'M PUTTIN DIS 1 ON MY FAVS

  Blaque Beauty
12/10/07 (02:06 PM) 
You can't put a time frame on healing a broken heart .... lovely right.

  terrenababii
12/09/07 (09:44 AM) 
awww this poem is soo sweet but at the same time itss sad like we all go through heartbreak [which is the worst feeling ever] and then its always that point in our lives where we just think back and realize how hurt we are you know?? you displayed those feelings very well in this piece it was mad deep ten stars jr xoxo ♥terrena

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