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"Still Iz"
  by BabyBoySpik


It was Love
Passionate affection between her nd I
A sexual desire, but also a personal attachment
Had me livin a lyfe of enchantment
Not just infatuation, but this overwhelming sensation
And itz crazii, this weakness I had for her
It was a feelin of fidelity
Never once have I had such devotion
So much exaltation, but also veneration
A feeling of deep respekt tinged with awe
How was it tht she had me in this state of mynd?
However so, I am glad..
Gave me feelings of which I never had
Just holdin her, raised my character
It made me feel high, superior
She had me in her grasp
Embraced in her armz
Ever so gentle, felt no harm
Just great amounts of bliss, enjoyment
And many momentz of happiness
.........It was love, nd still is
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Date Submitted: Jan 24, 2008 (12:36 AM)
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  Ya~Girl~Cie
02/01/08 (08:33 AM) 
WOW. I really really love this poem! Its so real. And I know how it feels to be in LOVE

  Miss Machiavel...
01/28/08 (01:32 AM) 
...True Love Is Infinite... Tight write!

  Quash
01/26/08 (04:36 PM) 
This was real cute. Nice to see that a guy can still express his emotions now a days. I liked this and I think you should keep it up. Imma give this one 10 starz!!!

  Sincero
01/25/08 (10:58 PM) 
ok den.. is there sumthin u aint tell me?? lolz.. this piece is tight bro

  Tiphani
01/25/08 (05:21 PM) 
aww this was a nice write. Im glad to see that men can show thier emotions for the oppisite sex

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