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"sTILL sICK. . . aND t0LKIN sLICK"
  by bRo0kLyN BaYbEe


i spit these rhymes like an earthquake,
am good enough to make your fagget **** brain ache,
dont mess with me or ill straight up cause you pain,
put slugs in your brain,
am still drinkin and two steppin,call it rock star livin,
dont play with me if you want to continue livin,
your vision is cloudy if you think you the best,
my rap is flawless,far as rappin you the worst,
i put these words together like a mathematical formular,
playin with me will mess up your dental formular,
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Date Submitted: Mar 26, 2009 (08:53 AM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
09/16/09 (06:28 PM) 
agressive, smooth, flowed through and you can acutally hear the accent when you read it this is def. your styleand im diggin' it fa' now palo' but let's see what else you got....Santi'

  jargon
09/08/09 (03:06 PM) 
lol alittle aggressive, hope no one makes you mad, there gonna get verbally slaughtered

  ON!X
04/11/09 (04:07 AM) 
You make this style seem easy. Rap poetry's not one of my strongpoints, but you've seemed to grab my attention. To you, it seems natural. Keep at it, I think you'll do great things with it.

  KINGLO
04/08/09 (01:41 AM) 
this was dope mama's !m like n this hunnnney

  gaiakilla
03/26/09 (09:01 AM) 
u type violent but dis shit right here is hot

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