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"Stop"
  by Shy Gyrl


I kinda wish you'd stop.
Stop thinking that I dont care
just cuz my brain tends to be half aware at times
doesnt mean that I can stop feeling the things that i write about you.
You dont have a clue
the feelings i go through
just by standing by you
makes me blush colors of a purple pink hue.
I kinda wish you'd stop
being so afraid of me.
Yes i tend to be a lil bit bossy
a bully is that what you called me?
I laugh at people and their stupidity
but is it My fault if the nonsense gives my head a lil whirl?
And I wish you'd stop standing so far away from me.
come closer so as u exhale
i can inhale to breathe.
Stand close as if you were my connecting puzzle piece.
Stand close
and hold me.
And never let go until the endless time of my dreams.

1:24am 9/08/08
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Date Submitted: Sep 14, 2008 (02:14 AM)
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  Lyrically_Me
11/19/08 (07:02 PM) 
"come closer so as u exhale i can inhale to breath. stand close as if you were my connecting puzzle piece" whoa! chica that is hot writing yo! I liked it alot. i loved ur emotions! 10 stars*****

  jhalilz
11/15/08 (12:06 AM) 
this write was amazing..i think that if you gave this to the person your talking about he would never doubt your love again..keep writing from your heart.10 starz

  Lique
11/13/08 (01:50 AM) 
oh-my-GOD..."come close so as you exhale I can inhale to breathe" I will never forget this line...you are amazing and one of a kind. You show a little something else in here tho...that the level beneath the surface visual of whatever we put to the world at random, keeps with the ultimate desire of our flesh, our soul, our spirit--REAL connection

  Sunkissed25
10/15/08 (05:50 PM) 
i agree with slym about that line...this was beautiful and raw girl....i like very much!!!

  DaddysGirl
10/14/08 (03:31 PM) 
awww.... very sweet! your words are vulnerable & real in this write. nicely done, lady ~much love~

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