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"Story of Thug Poetry(Poetry Story)"
  by Thug poeit Tiru


i started az a young nigga.
earning my respect by pulling da trigger
everyday my life wuz at high stakes
runing from da police n highspeed chase
To get respected i do wut ever it takes.
I would do da unexspected
because thats da best way 2 get respected.
kuz nobody luv a brooke brother from the gutter.
kuz it wuz hard tryna talk like alsharpten.
when u living inside a broke down apartment.
and nobody kares wut u gotta say.
If u aint gettn payed
kuz if u wuzsent counting alot of cash.
she wuz quick 2 walk off fast.
and to da whole block.
u wuz a laughing stock.
kuz n my hood nobody like da kidz thats went to church.
They wanted that brother that wuz putting n wrk.
Tha one that had all da gurlz droping there skurts.
and da drugdealer who driving around n a mercades bins
and comiting a life of sin
.i never unstderstand why da bad guys stay on top
and da good guyz we seem get left at da bottom of the crops
kuz sumtime a brother get tired of playing da good guy role
then he swichez over and being da biggest bad guy is his #1 goal
just 2 let u knoe unpopularity
can raise a person anger daily
and mistreating da innocense will birth a evil
exsitence.
and haveing 2 much pride
kan b 2 much power 2 bide
u might end up making your own life collide
so u need 2 have a enormise amount of bible knowlege
and u kan create thingz that cant b demowlege
im not telling this frm wut i heard
i telling this is wut i knoe
so listen 2 this thug poetry story
and c how sum thingz should go


lets talk about racism
they say slaver if 4ever at it absence
but 4ever my people will talk wit a slave accent
white man dragging da balck man 2 death wit his truck
then walking inside n da court room thinking he wuz tuff
and lets dnt 4get about our gays sister and brother
they living n danger.
everyday being treated like strangers
even if he is a fag.
itz not your judge 2 put him n a bodybag.
and da gurl who like wearing boy closhes.
she gots 2 answer 2 god
on her own
and lets not 4get about da croket cops.
who like 2 put young brother n there grave box
wut about the little teenage boy working hourly gettn payed $5.50
wrking at wendys
and da people without job has nothing 2 do.
so they put 22 inside
that young dude.
Then they rape his gurl.
and then went back and laugh and brag about it 2 da whole world.
sum negro have no life des dayz
so they just steady taken peole life away.
killing off gods gift. n a instance swift
and da news report of a cut up body being found n a ditch.
but lets remeber yung mike loved 2 run his mouth dissen.
then one day he came up missing.
then 3day later da trash can started stinking
now everybody kalling up homicide.
and tears r filling his moma eyes
it wuz so sad as the whole hood watch her wheeping
as she held her son on da concrete bleeding
she screAMING all crazy
.constaly saying get up my baby
I couldent feel his moma sorrow.
kuz her son birthday wuz 2morow
instade of buying her son a gift
she buying him a casket 2 b lift
people dont understand da pain we cause
and we dnt understand Murder is permanet
thats why rip is written n a grave stone
4 eternity 2 b shown
but im not scared 2 die
kuz after this i have belief itz a better life
so everyday i keep living 4 christ
and keep writing this thug poetry
to help set the truth free
and i think this is a story
that u should hear
so just free yo mind and open your ears
and listen 2 my story.
this may b last time i get 2 speak it
so plez dnt ignore me
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Date Submitted: Nov 02, 2009 (03:23 PM)
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  Shanta`
11/04/09 (07:47 PM) 
This was serious writing! VERY GOOD! :-) enjoyed reading ...it was so deep! True stories always are...

  Dimplez
11/02/09 (09:24 PM) 
You make some good points in this piece, very strong topics. There's something about how strong your thoughts are and how weak the presentation is though. Don't take it the wrong way but I think this piece would work better if you cut out the grammatical errors. I know I have them in a lot of my own pieces too and they tend to distract the reader, or at least they distract me. Other than that, this is a very sound piece, I think the first stanza is my favorite, I can relate!

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