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"STRAIGHT HOOKED"
  by candy-b
  - This Poem is a response to the poem 2 against 1 by Poetic Aquarian


ITS 3 AM
ON A SATURDAY
HAVENT HEARD FROM CORY
CANT GET IN TOUCH WIT SHAY

BACK N FORTH IM PACIN
MY MIND IS RACIN
ITS BEEN NEARLY 48 HOURS
SINCE OUR LAST ENCOUNTER

MY BODY IS WHINING
GOING THRU WITHDRAWLS
SEXUAL FRUSTRATION
IS THE CAUSE

::PACIN::
::BITING NAILS::
::WAITIN::

FUCK DIS I CANT TAKE DIS SHIT
IMA HEAD OVA CORY’S RIGHT QUICK
I NEED DAT DICK

90 MPH FROM THE PARKWAY
PULL UP
SEE SHAY’S CAR IN THE DRIVEWAY

::WALK UP::
DOORS UNLOCKED
::OPEN UP::
AN IM SHOCKED
BY THE TRAIL OF CLOTHES
ON THE FLOOR
THRU THE BATHROOM DOOR…
I HEAR GROANS
AND MOANS

OPEN UP TO SEE
CORY ON HIS KNEES

SHAY UP ON THE SINK
POSED WIT
NO CLOTHES
CORY LOOKS AT ME
WHILE THERES PUSSY ON HIS NOSE

THEY BOTH SMILE
NO WORDS

CORY COMES AND LIFTS MY SKIRT
BENDS ME OVA
AND GETS RIGHT TO WORK

HES IN ME HARD AND RARE
WHILE I LIFT SHAYS THIGHS IN THE AIR

IM TAKIN OVA HIS JOB
THEN SHAYS PUSSY BEGINS TO THROB

SHES HAVIN AN ATTACK
CUZ SHES NEAR HER CLIMAX
IM TRYNA TELL HER TO RELAX
BUT CORY’S BANGIN OUT MY BACK

THEN HE PUTS IT INTO TURBO

AN MY JUICES BEGIN TO FLOW

CORY’S MOLDIN MY ASS LIKE PLAY-DOH

SHAY IS GOIN LOCO

SHE BUST HER NUT
I BUST MY NUT
THEN I FEEL
CORYS LIQUID ON MY BUTT

THEY GOT ME GOIN INSANE
I FEEL LIKE IM IN ONE OF THOSE BOOKS BY ZANE

GOT DAMN
I GUESS JUST CANT GET ENOUGH
OF THIS NASTY STUFF

STRAIGHT HOOKED

::CANDY-B::

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Date Submitted: Sep 07, 2007 (01:31 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (7)
  DCpoet34
07/07/08 (10:57 AM) 
this is hot...great write

  night light
09/30/07 (04:34 AM) 
I'm not wit that 2 on 1 shit, but that was hot and I liked how it flowed. Another good write. Next

  Andrew84
09/12/07 (11:18 AM) 
Wow. You nasty, girl. I like dat!! But I bet I'm freakier than you. You seen my work. And just the way my poem "Pussy" made you wanna fuck, this poem of your made me wanna penetrate the next female that walks past my front door. Question is, what would it take for YOU, candy-b, to come by my crib........ Ten stars. Great poem.

  HoneyBronze
09/11/07 (09:43 AM) 
You r sooo nasty, and i like it!! U have definitely painted a picture 4 me to follow as i read. Very arousing!!

  asiaV
09/07/07 (04:20 PM) 
damn... a lil frecky girl

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