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""STRIPPED KING""
  by DREALPOET


SINCE I'VE LOST YOU
I'M LOST TOO
GOD KNOWS I'LL DO ANYTHING 4 ANOTHER CHANCE
BUT I KNOW WE'RE THROUGH
SINCE THE BIRTH OF OUR RELATIONSHIP I'VE BEEN CURSED
NOT BECAUSE OF YOU BUT THE PAIN AND AGONY I PUT YOU THROUGH
I WAS THE KING OF OUR KINGDOM BUT YOU STRIPPED MY CROWN
YOU GAVE IT TO ANOTHER MAN TO MAKE YOU PROUD
NOW YOU HAVE YOUR OWN LIFE AND DO WHAT YOU DO
MADE YOUR OWN KINGDOM AND MADE SURE I COULD'NT GET THROUGH
SWEET TALKS, SWEET LINES DONT MEAN SHIT TO YOU
ALL YOU WANT IS A MAN TO MAKE YOU FEEL BRAND NEW
AND YOU MADE YOUR POINT WHEN YOU TOLD ME THAT MAN WAS'NT YOU
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2007 (07:39 PM)
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  Bree Bree
10/20/07 (09:11 PM) 
the flow was nice and the ending fucked me up. i feel you on this one. though i am usually on the other side, i can feel the emotion comig off of every word. 10 starz

  tiva
10/20/07 (08:38 PM) 
Love, Love , Love, Since the beginning of time...This poem made me feel proud to be me...understanding when a woman or man knows what they want from a relationship...it is impossible to give them anything less..because if you do...you will loose your stripes...Excellent write..You took me to the top and back down ..and back up again. Love Peace and Joy

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