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"STRUGGLES.."
A Da'Mon aka D-Nice and LADY HYPNOTIC Collaboration


  LADY HYPNOTIC:

LIFE IS WAY TOO MUCH OF A STRUGGLE
BELIEVE ME WHEN I SAY I'LL RATHER LIVE IN A BUBBLE....
AT LEAST I'D STAY ALIVE AND AVOID ALL THE TROUBLE
AVOID ALL THA DRAMA..AND AVOID LIFE'S HUSTLE......
BUT IN REALITY MY HUSTLE IS LIFE.....NO SPLIT
AND I SWALLOW WAT I CHEW LIKE A MAN NO SPIT...
AND DONT GET THA WRONG IMPRESSION...I AINT TALKIN BOUT DICK..
SOMETIMES I CANT TAKE IT....AND I FEEL LIKE GIVIN UP
BUT I GOTTA FINISH WHAT I START...SO RIGHT NOW I CANT STOP...

  Da'Mon aka D-Nice:

Yeah struggles shit I know all about it
You talkin bout swallowin shit I cant even chew it
Just too much to think about at one time
I just wish time could stop at da drop of a dime
But it aint gonna be that easy
And I know somebody out there needs me
Too much shit to maintain and try to get through
But rhymin is my only freedom of da world I once knew
Livin in a bubble move over and make room for me
And if we did the world wouldnt even notice LADY or D
But we just do wat we do and get through these struggle
POP!!! damn time to face them there goes da bubble

  LADY HYPNOTIC:

YUP...EVERYBODY GOT THEIR TIME TO SHINE
NIGGAZ BETTA MOVE OVA OR WE'LL FORCE THEM TO RESIGN...
I WOULD SAY DAT ITZ KINDA LIKE IMA POLITICIAN
CUZ WHEN I REACH 2 THA TOP..I WANNA STAY IN DAT POSITION..
AND I DONT FOLLOW RULES...SO FUCK YA TRADITIONS
I CANT BE DESCRIBED...SO DONT TRY TO FIND A DEFINITION...
OF ME....BASICALLY
I TRY TO PUT ALL MY PROBLEMS ASIDE BUT THEY KEEP COMIN BACK
SO I GOTTA HANDLE ALL THE BURDENS ON MY BACK...
AND HATAZ ARE MEANT TO HATE..AND DATZ WAT THEY DO
WHAT CAN I SAY? "U CANT WALK A MILE IN MY SHOES"...
NAH....IM GETTIN TIRED OF DAT OLD ASS LINE
AND I DUNNO WAT TO SAY SO IMA LET DA'MON RHYME.....

  Da'Mon aka D-Nice:

"I know wat you goin through" dats wat they would say
But really you dont know me outside my words in reality
You dont know da people I know
And cant exactly go like I can go
Talkin bout walkin a mile they cant even walk a foot it my shoes
Dats y Im here to be somewhat nice and rude
But through all of dis I still tell da truth
You a politician, well im more like a citizen
Cool, calm and collect but never dat innocent
Da type to stand in da shadows but also bein known
I know dis kinda sounds ironic
But only time I was stressed free was when I heard Dr. Dre's Chronic
So as a citizen I struggle to get along wit a drug fiend mother
And to try to settle war wit my own damn brother
Other than that there is no struggle
But if I dont achieve em I'll just make dem my muscles

  LADY HYPNOTIC:

DAMN...LUCKY YOU..I DONT EVEN GET TO BE FREE
SIX YEARS OLD....AND MY FATHER RAPED ME....
MY MOTHER....DATZ SOMEBODY I DONT LOVE
AND MY PROBLEMZ ARE SOMETHIN I BARELY SPEAK OF...
CUZ PEOPLE TEND TO GET KINDA SYMPATHETIC
AND IN THE PROCESS THEY GET APOLOGETIC...
MAYBE DATZ WHY I WONT LET MY SHIELD DOWN
CUZ IF I DO..IMA JUS DROWN...
IN ALL THA PAIN....AND I'LL STRAIN
TO REMAIN....
IN DIS WORLD...I SEE PAST SOULS AND I WONDER ABOUT MY OWN
AM I GROWING TOO FAST OR AM ALREADY GROWN?
PEOPLE LOOK ON THE OUTSIDE..THEY SEE WAT IS SHOWN
AND I CANT HELP BUT FEEL ALL ALONE.....

  Da'Mon aka D-Nice:

Feelin all alone dat sounds like me
My only true blood locked up in a penitentiary
Now when people ask y I dont smile in my pics I cant tell
Cause I once tried to put up my soul to sell
DAMN I just cant get over da fact dat I gettin grown
Ever since I could remember I was holdin my own
And when I talk you can hear it in my tone
Smilin in life just cause I dont hold my heart on my sleeves
But when my queen left all I could do was ask y did she leave
Im done tellin bout my struggles and problems
Da real question is who can solve em?
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Date Submitted: May 14, 2007 (07:15 AM)
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  EWC
05/24/07 (12:59 PM) 
Thats hot rite their yall did yalls thang real talk keep it up i feel yall and know exactly what yall our going through its good somebody can talk about life like this...

  jazmyne
05/19/07 (10:21 PM) 
damn that hit home in alot of places... lady you did your thing... son keep up the good work ... i love when you do collabos... it show your strengths.....

  CUTIE PIE
05/15/07 (12:57 PM) 
yall two are really hot together i like the way that yall put it together i like how you made it work for ya keep it up both of you

  S.O.G.
05/14/07 (11:47 PM) 
collabz r wonderful u kno wouldnt it b tight if ppl could b n a 3way collab.10starz on dys all day u feelz

  Jonathan Robin...
05/14/07 (11:22 PM) 
chemistry...whoa!! We each have our own but somehow we end up receiving the same victory knowing that it's no longer a weight to be carried ony our shoulders. Some people really just don't have a clue but I really enjoyed this and it's going in my favorites. ten stars

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