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"Successful"
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Successful instrumental - Drake



It's hard finding

Success-

fullness in that,
I'm sorry that,
now & again
after the fact

I've strayed away

after fact finding
finding out
all about
this
&
that
frequently
leaving behind
things that subtract

Faithfulness/Hopefulness

Because

I'm finding no future
in that

Abstract

fronting is frequently
for those
lacking in tact
females that
like leaving behind trails
&
this entails we both fail

Because

All this reality is
thus letting the truth
prevail

And still though,
for real though

I'm still finding that
in fact I still just
want to be just that

'Successful'

That's fully living in fact
less stress
full fantasy mess

I'll find my success in that

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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2009 (11:52 AM)
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  Afroditee
10/23/09 (04:57 PM) 
(Yes, I read it again)

  Afroditee
10/23/09 (04:56 PM) 
The last stanza wrapping everything together is incredible! Hopeful...yet cynical in the hopefulness. A cynical life lesson imparted as only you can.

  Afroditee
08/03/09 (05:04 PM) 
This was indeed very philosphical, and filled with the masterful wordplay that only you can perfect. Loved the rhythm, and raised an eyebrow at the cynical subtle femalejab, then moved on...loved this.

  Chocolatezeus
07/30/09 (11:02 PM) 
mentally exciting. the effect you laid down with your flow was exceptional

  ...Da Futurist...
07/29/09 (02:28 PM) 
fortune cookie digest right here for readers..twisted words convuloted meanings which made this even more complex..sick word

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