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"Suicides Dagger ( H H Dark side Challenge)"
  by Tpoet
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Suicides Dager( H H Dark side Challenge) by Group: Heaven's Haven


I’m an introverted extrovert lurking in between the lines
Of the darkest lights complexities seeking its smell
Hunting for all organisms touched by its hand I am the
Doer of deeds need to trick the mind as fingers intertwine
Leaving hope exposed to daybreak and lust in refutation
Of us so step through these eyes to fixations taste
Let me lull you to sleep and end your worrisome heart
Blink these crimson kisses of deaths personable perspective
Between your lashes as open windows temp your feet to jump
On winds tail please feel free to soar the skies lies and remember
Me as the one who became your love’s suicides slitting wrists allowing
Pretty crimson droplets to flow over purple tinted lips I am your
Introverted extraverted crypt keeper
Playing tag within your emotional strings pulling you between the now and then
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Date Submitted: Apr 02, 2009 (09:40 PM)
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  Poetic Lyricis...
04/22/09 (01:55 PM) 
Your words most definately painted this picture---This is a powerful piece...10stars of course

  Isis sun
04/20/09 (08:15 PM) 
It was the words coupled with this amazingly grim picture that had me sucked in to this piece: "Leaving hope exposed to daybreak and lust in refutation Of us so step through these eyes to fixations taste Let me lull you to sleep and end your worrisome heart ".....you mastered this mood perfectly.

  big josh
04/13/09 (04:37 PM) 
damn this was good as hell, the word play was hot, nice write

  Consciousness
04/09/09 (11:48 PM) 
Poweful....Spoken....Words...the last line serious....all I can say is..mama u slayed it again

  iva
04/09/09 (09:58 PM) 
awesome t great flow of words

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