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"sum hot shyt"
  by jazzebunny


im finna spit some hot shyt
some rock da mic right shyt
some damn shorty still on dat type shyt
some damn mii nig dont hold her back let ha loose shyt
some damn u sure jazzy aint been hittin da goose type shyt
some damn man when she spit she used her emphasis type shyt
haha ur funny girl type shyt
no im not finna let it up type shit
some have u an greg n dem like damn u aight type shyt
sumn u can bang in da whip type shyt
not far from lyrical shyt
sumn to get ya party jumpin type shyt
sumn i wont boast nor brag type shyt
no not sum waiting to exhale shyt
sumn to get u thru jail type shyt
sumn like cassidy i wont tell shyt
some damn power of the pen type shyt
some fuck who no fuck you type shyt
some grab ya balls an run type shyt
some aye yo u drop da gun type shyt
but see when i spit my shyt
it dosent quit
it keeps goin its some relentless type shyt
some wats love got to do wit it type shyt
sumn my elders wont like type shyt
some damnnnnnnnnnnn its friday type shyt
some yea she's right she's the lyrical princess type shyt
some 07' run it type shyt
sumn my hata's finna hate on type shyt
cause when my pen gets the flowin
my hatin hoe's are already known
this shyt is finna be some real hot shyt
some no baby i wont lie type shyt
sumn u might wanna go an hide from ur parents type shyt
sumn they wont 4get shyt
some put me in the history books type shyt
some make u think type shyt
now dont u think that was some hot shyt?
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Date Submitted: Mar 14, 2008 (07:20 PM)
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  S.O.G.
03/24/08 (12:37 AM) 
yes it was some hot shit.i did enjoy this, each line made u think of something different,love a poet that knows how to make the audience think.i love how hard u came with it.intense write, a interesting and raw read

  LiL Jr.
03/17/08 (10:36 PM) 
I LIKE THIS ONE NICE WIRTE, 10 STARZ 4R, LIL JR.

  G-I-P (Gifted ...
03/16/08 (11:00 AM) 
See here we go again I love this one as well you are talented this is so heartfelt for me hit the spot you keep that pen flowing and me reading

  J Baby
03/15/08 (04:27 PM) 
Hell yea that wat the shyt U feel me I like it cause you rhymed and kept it real all at the same time and you ain't let up I feel U on that not ten stars**

  QUINNEYBABY
03/15/08 (09:27 AM) 
i lyk dhis one, yu did a gewd job, on dhis...hot rite keep em coming, nd keep dha mic rocking, nd dha spit poppin..LOL...but overall good job though....love yah

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