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"SUM1 PLZ SEND ROSES"
  by highoffdasoundofreal


words are lost
never have been spoken
they say in there place
hoping that the person will come back
they\'re gone i refuse them being forgotten
it\'s getting more crazy
it\'s life baby it doesn\'t have to be this way though
it seems like time is repeating in chicago
i\'m just waiting for the new al capone 2 crawl out
his hiding place
stop shooting stop shooting
children are bystanding
so young so young
life was just beginning
in this concrete garden we have grown here we need more flowers
some 1 please send roses
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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (09:28 PM)
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  mrzross
10/30/09 (01:15 PM) 
dat was hot...i feel u, shootin is not the nswer to anything...nice wite

  G.A.
10/29/09 (06:56 PM) 
damn this drop was heavy.. too many people, especially young people, dyin over wrong and little bullshit and accidental situations like wrong wrong time scenarios over gang wars and robberies etc..., this was truly spoken out with grace but more importantly with TRUTH!

  santiago\\\\\\...
10/28/09 (10:21 PM) 
chicago...pls stand up... you did us some justice in this piece palomita and im glad to have found someone from my city holding it down we should def. put something together soon but i gotta alot on my plate right know you spoke alot of truth in this piece and that's what attracts me to any good writer...truth... im digging this style palomita hope you swing by my way soon show me wat cha got lol im waiting..Santi'

  Emmortal Essen...
10/28/09 (10:01 PM) 
Wow this piece was very deep. We have alot of people in the world dying today especially young people. And it seems like there's no shortage at all for them. I just wish the kids would know the wrong road is not the way to go. And its not just them sometimes they can be innocent bystanders as you said. Very heartfelt indeed. I'll send roses for peace in the world.... Never Let Your Ink Run Dry.....Stay Blessed & Encouraged!!!

  W_J_lyriC
10/28/09 (09:25 PM) 
I could feel a lot of frantic emotion in this piece. I could feel the pain as I read. Great write, keep it up and I'll send you a rose @>--

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