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"Surah 7:200"
  by .Cat:General.LoSo.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem James 4:7 by Wrighter


We walk the earth
created in an image
that we can't as humans fathom
faceless is the Keeper
of our faiths
and we be not all alike
amongst us
walk
talk
live
love
the non-believers
hypocrites subconsciously
refusing to submit
or pray
but in receipt often
of blessings
in which
they do not hesitate
to partake
over time we
the pious of the people
mix and meld
born sinners still themselves
some may get lost
along the way
begin to
do as they do
and stray
from the path
but trust
those that know
know
when they turn for worse
and a back to right
inevitably a fight
between our inner angels
and demons of the flesh
some stand inside the darkness
waiting for their eyes to see
but we fall to our knees
and just as the scripture says
"if a suggestion from Satan assails thy mind,
seek refuge in Allah - fore He hearth and knowth all things"
and in the castration of submission
His mercy and grace He brings
weary but for a minute
cause if you ask Him to
He'll pick you up - dust you off
cause until He takes you
this life...you got to stay in it

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Date Submitted: Oct 02, 2008 (06:32 PM)
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  Wrighter
10/07/08 (04:34 PM) 
I don't know if I was able to tell you that I loved your response. I was away at a retreat this weekend so I was "online" from my sidekick but not really- WONDERFUL piece =] loved it (seriously) and I think you were the first person to ever write a response to a poem of mine. 10 stars

  poetrys peace
10/07/08 (05:43 AM) 
so true, I enjoyed your Truth poet! very nice write!

  **HOLLA**
10/04/08 (01:14 PM) 
"FACELESS IS THE KEEPER OF OUR FAITH" WOWWWWWWWWWWW

  Ryter
10/03/08 (10:25 PM) 
"the pious of the people mix and meld born sinners still themselves " It's writters that you that make me want to be better. This was terrific! God bless so that you keep it up. Good write :)

  WriteItDown
10/03/08 (09:15 PM) 
A believer... but that doesn't make me like this peice. It was just generally eye opening and enjoyable to read. great write.

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