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"SURROUNDED"
  by KEITARO TAJ


SO CLOSE TO MY GOAL
BUT SO VERY FAR AWAY
SO TIRED OF SETBACKS
AND MESSING UP EVERY DAY

SURROUNDED
BY DARKNESS AND SMOKE
SO FULL OF FEAR
NOONE AROUND
TO FEEL MY TEAR
WHEN MY HEART SADENS
FROM MY BROTHERS BLOODY EYES
AND SEARCHING FOR AWAY
TO CLEAR HIS GRAY SKIES

SO CLOSE TO MY GOAL
BUT SO VERY FAR AWAY
SO TIRED OF SETBACKS
AND MESSING UP EVERY DAY

SURROUNDED
BY SIN
AND TEMPTATION
IN A WORLD FULL OF HATE
ITS SO EASY TO LOOSE CONCENTRATION
WHEN YOUR FAMILY
HEAR YOU BUT DONT LISTEN
YOU LOOSE FAITH
IN SOMEONE
WHO ACTUALLY PAYS ATTENTION

SO CLOSE TO MY GOAL
BUT SO VERY FAR AWAY
SO TIRED OF SETBACKS
AND MESSING UP EVERY DAY

SURROUNDED
BY THE PAST
THAT I TRY TO MAKE MY PAST
AND LETTING SATAN
KINDA TAKE CONTROL
AND ALL THE DEMONS
TAKE HOLD
FATHER I LOVE YOU
AND I KNOW YOU ARE REAL
BUT
IN A PERDICUMENT
AS THIS
ITS HARD TO FEEL

CAUSE IM SURROUNDED


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Date Submitted: Nov 22, 2008 (03:25 PM)
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  stayfocus3d
11/24/08 (02:30 AM) 
i really can identify with this...

  koolaid
11/23/08 (04:27 PM) 
i loved htis one and i feel you i feel the same way alot of times

  kavience
11/23/08 (04:02 PM) 
wow i like this one its good

  ladybugkk'sbab...
11/23/08 (12:52 AM) 
ALL I CAN SAY IS DAMNNNNNNNN dat was real hot ima telling u dis is the best poem i have EVER read I LOVE DIS its real hot ima fav dis 10stars keep the pen moving u got crazii skills{ps. its real real real deep and i feel you on dis real real deep}

  dontnohow
11/22/08 (04:58 PM) 
ooh snaps..... just cant get away now can u..lol.. i so feel ya.. 10stars 4 ur piece

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