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"Sweet Dreams"
  by Syndel


Your mind is
Choking .
Flames forever burn
Cut off life’s woes
Redirect the noise

Sweet dreams

Rolling thunder
Casualty of depression
Loss of will
Now a need to survive

Sweet dreams

Fairness shaken
Half dead half awaken
Sinking unknowing
Into the abyss
Look into the madness
Take a piss

Sweet dreams

Looking for the Mo Betta
Repeatedly saying whatever
Fumbling along
Contemplating wrong

Sweet dreams

Suicide
Rectify
Out of lies
Do or die

Sweet Dream it would be
Not to live an existence
But to be free

These Dreams - Heart

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Date Submitted: Oct 10, 2009 (07:42 AM)
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  Angel
11/12/09 (02:42 PM) 
Sounds like a poetic suicide. When the pain drives your spirit so far, you do get to a point where eternal rest is the only rest that seems worth getting. Been here - too many times to count.

  The Mad Poet
10/21/09 (05:37 PM) 
I like the creativity that went into this write....Your pen is truly blessed....Keep flowing I love the BG & the song choice is perfect....Much love

  Ordained2Chang...
10/20/09 (05:12 PM) 
Not sure of the intent... I really wouldnt consider this to be a sweet dream, but I guess the last stanza kinda explains where you\'re coming from... It would be better for freedom than captivity

  (Floetic~One) ...
10/11/09 (12:24 PM) 
you delivered this one wonderfully... loved the presentation... stay hot... God bless!

  BlessedOne
10/11/09 (01:51 AM) 
Great execution of this feeling. The background and the song really helps add to the feel of your words.

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