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"Sweetest Sin (B Easy Version)"
  by B Easy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem SWEETEST SIN by babylYric


You are the sweetest sin I've ever known
Prone to keeping past memories of you and I
Circulating thru my dome
Somehow... Someway... Knowing that you’re perfect for me
Just a thousand times over

So everytime I hear you say "Yo"
I love you like there is no tomorrow
And if today is the day
Where tomorrow isn’t seen
Then I want you closer to me then my spine or my spleen
Just above the stomach, next to the heart
If you know what I mean
Wanting you and needing you
As if doing both simultaneously
Just being spontaneously planned

So, Miss Temptation
May I borrow a moment of your time?
Just a sample is needed
Cause never all of you can be mine
Freezing time momentarily
Just to keep that image implanted in my mind
And it lurks in all the dark corners like a phantom
To just show everytime I think of you
Automatically everyday like the national anthem
And I couldn’t fathom the thought of not being able to
Touch your skin
The very thought of the idea
Is something I wouldn’t want to begin
My burning desire
That comes from within
Just a few reasons why you’re my sweetest sin
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Date Submitted: Mar 27, 2008 (09:00 AM)
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  TANENE
08/08/09 (12:44 AM) 
VERY TALENTED I BET U BLOW THE TOP OFF THE PEN EACH TIME U WRITE A POEM....YO U DONT EVEN HAV TO SHOW ME ANY LUV BACK YOU'VE ALREADY DONE THAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

  smilez89
07/25/09 (09:04 AM) 
you too good of a writer keep goin

  monica
07/15/09 (01:38 PM) 
OOOOO WEEEEE THIS WAS HOT I LOVED IT I LOVE THE TITLE THE FLOW OF THE POEM MA FAVORITE PART HAD TO BE EXCUSE ME MISS TEMPATION IN MA MIND I SAID YESSSS LMBO AT ANY RATE YOU GET 10 STARS FROM ME

  LilKekee
05/26/08 (04:16 AM) 
THiS WAS GOOD...V3RY iNT3R3STiN' AND ATT3NTiON GRABBiN U STAY'D ON SUBJ3CT AND V3RY GOOD RHYTHM...10 STARZ

  MissMysic010
04/30/08 (06:24 PM) 
ok,ok...dis was really good..i like da flow of dis...i had 2 read it twice....lol..10 stars from ya girl Mar Mar

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