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"Take away the rain"
  by angeleyes1
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Rainy Season by geel


Sometimes we see things
That aren\'t meant to be seen
I hear your heart hurting
As you let out a scream
Take away the rain
And let sunshine come your way
Wipe those tears dry
So you can start a better day
I will give you strength
To relieve the pain
Release your fears
And take away the rain
I will never leave
Because I cherish you
I give you hugs and kisses
Just to help you through
Life is full of surprises
here and everywhere
You never know what you end up with
Sometimes you just don\'t care
Never say never
Because it will bring you down
keep your head up
As pain circles around
You just have to trust
Your faith in God\'s hands
he gives you warm embrace
As he always understands
I never saw pity
Or sympathy from you
That\'s why you will always be
The strongest woman I ever knew

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Date Submitted: Oct 26, 2009 (04:01 AM)
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  Psychosis Aka ...
11/09/09 (12:36 PM) 
to be a friend and to scribe in word is a lost art in poetry. this was heartfelt and just beautiful to read

  TWANGINU
11/08/09 (08:50 PM) 
wow now this here was very great damn girl.i felt this.great response.i gotta fav this one,keep doing your thing

  LateefahFreeWO...
11/06/09 (08:27 PM) 
Love this compassionate write filled with love and encouragement. It reminds me of " to give unto them beauty for ashes, the oil of joy for mourning, the garment of praise for heaviness..." Beautiful ink, Sis.

  BSavvy
11/04/09 (02:04 PM) 
This is such an inspirational write.... I just loved this piece.... Just beautfiul and a friend, true friend you are indeed for this is friendship and what it's all about.....

  restrike
11/03/09 (02:13 AM) 
this is like a symphony. the flow continues and its dosent falter all the way through. good work truely amazing.

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