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"Take Me as I am"
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take me as i am, this man with this plan
plans to stand with fam hand and hand.
my grace, my face i be what it takes-
so take me, make me, create me, face me.
but don't hate me since um different,
take what i am givin.
if i make you listen then you in my vision-
so take me up, make i be us
produce trust and let what be what.
i let enough be enough
some took me and hooked me and shook me-
so now i could see, when the artificial arrives
the tissue cleared my eyes to my surprise i now see wide -
i see far, i see pain i see hard
i see dogs in these wars try to defeat all
but when heat calls, i fall and crawl-
til it blow over, call me not a soldier?
but soldiers die, i already told ya, i stay alive
so take me, wake me, chase me, ace me
organize your mind, i've organized mine
i've immortalized the border lines of dyin.
figure out whats in this niggaz mouth-
bigga doubts or triggered routes.
both and neither, folks give me the-
hopes to go and retrieve ya.
take me as i am, the plans, the dance, the chance
the romance, the hands, the man.
take my secrets, take my weakness
take my sweetness, take Speechless
take me as i am
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Date Submitted: Nov 26, 2006 (07:03 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Cayonda
02/22/07 (11:21 AM) 
good

  Lemee
11/27/06 (08:00 PM) 
you are very talented

  caitlin
11/27/06 (12:08 AM) 
This is why I refuse to write wit ya'll .. Ya'll ten levels above me.

  tha prince of ...
11/26/06 (08:33 PM) 
umm gd write very nice very real let me go see if i can find u a 6 star

  truthBtold
11/26/06 (07:14 PM) 
"i c far, i c pain,i c hard"....classic boo i could frame some shit like that

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