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"Take Me Home!"
  by Nikkii*3


Come pick me up and take me home,
I can't stay here anymore,
The way i feel inside right now,
Of this i'm really sure.

A physical and mental hurt,
Leaves me sobbing like a child,
I'm too far away from you,
And the pain is no longer mild.

It's sprung to life and taken over,
I can't control this pain,
All i know is i miss you,
And the tears fall like rain...
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Date Submitted: Mar 03, 2009 (04:19 AM)
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  nooney94
03/18/09 (09:06 PM) 
LOL I ALSO FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT THIS 2 LOL

  Sentinal
03/03/09 (04:43 PM) 
Wow that's some deep, powerful pain you expressing. I hope you get to see you family soon. Keep bleeding your emotions out on paper instead of holding them in. 10s

  da black princ...
03/03/09 (07:53 AM) 
so far I've read two of your poems, and see you are full of pain. keep writng because this is a good way to relieve stress. stay strong. you are great writer because you write from the heart. maybe one day you can publish your first book of poetry, and all of your pain can be used to help someone else. (cool)

  JokerJay
03/03/09 (04:25 AM) 
this is really sad but i know how you feel. this also reminds me of paradise city by GNR.

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