This is a heartfelt and wonderful adventure of love... your lines had me wanting... simply wanting. Nice write... I need more...

this is so sweet, simple love stated so beautifully in a sweet love sonnet... Very nice write,... I love the picture too, I think it's great how you display your poetry! It's very nice.. .

Awww! This was beautiful....... That's what I want too...... Lovely write hun.

You packed my bags with this sonnet if I had a woman and she came to me like this I would go with no resistance . Wonderful write this is

*picks you up and carries you off* gorgeous woman you know i'll take you anywhere that i am, let me take you to the ends of the earth and the borders of heaven, you can go with me anytime you'd like