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"Take Off Your Timbs ||"
  by imperfect beauTy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Take Off Your Timbs by imperfect beauTy


....take off your Timbs

as
the
endless miles you walk in those boots, ceases here

and

allow me to make one thing clear

my dear

once you enter this door
i implore
plead even
that you permit me to please you
like you've never encountered before

i am not one who needs to be the only, to ever be romanced
because, from the moment, at you, i first glanced

i knew

a love, with you, would be enhanced

you

had me entranced

taken to levels unfounded
reaching new heights, as souls are surrounded
saturated
infatuated
from the very first kiss
indisputable bliss
with this miss

simmering in loves potion
basking in loves devotion
as the strawberry scented lotion

manages to seep

ever so deep

into the wave of our emotion
enraptured in our ocean

of
elements
draped and drenched in decadence
question not, ones relevance

as we both know

tonight

we

...are the only ones that matter, so


shall we proceed?

in our, heavenly, while simultaneously, sinful deed?

allow me to get entangled in your essence
permeate in your presence
sip on your effervescence
lick upon your lyrical lessons


neck biting
how inviting
ear teasing
how pleasing
nibbling of nipples
raw emotion ripples
flicking of the tongue
mutually sprung
pulling of the hair
"don't stop, right there"

tasting me on your dick
i know you like that shit


passionate moans
succulent groans
sighs of ecstasy
contorting pleasurably
twisting and bending
parts of me, i'm lending
proddin' and pokin'
a mere token

of my insatiable love for thee
and what i can bring

so,
step into my room king

but
before the back breaking begins


please
permit me to






...take off your Timbs



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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2007 (12:08 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 09/17/07 (10:55 PM)
Author: imperfect beauTy
Poem Title: Take Off Your Timbs |||

Date: 07/16/07 (12:53 AM)
Author: CynSur Poemist
Poem Title: After I Take Em off

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comment icon  COMMENTS (31)
  S.O.G.
01/25/08 (08:11 PM) 
OMG!!! this one touched me deeply, sweety my my my, this poem was yummy yum yum to read, makes u wanna well u know ignite passion till the fire burns it self type love making u know.walking into the room where the lights stay dim and the soft music surrounds the 2 souls prepared to battle to see who the most powerful lover is u know.just freaky type love making.the passion in this one was ever so soothing u know.beautiful

  Ladybug
09/23/07 (05:32 AM) 
i love the first but i love love this it even more moving and real. your words are as flowetik says on fiyah...I love the way this is laid out the way the write just draws you in and captivates you beyond question.

  Flowetikk
09/19/07 (02:32 PM) 
flicking of the tongue, mutually sprung..goodness gracious...where is this man at with the timbs...i need to tell him something GOOD, real GOOD..this is FIYAH sis and you know it

  Slongentl
09/16/07 (12:25 PM) 
wow...I am jsut as gratefuel to read this one as the first...your skills are great and the flow is excellent...

  Lyrical Soul W...
08/10/07 (06:19 PM) 
U know you going to have to stop writing like this people can get horny off words you know lol great write sweetie snap snap i can actually stand and do this lol

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