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"Take the Lead"
  by Bratt


I dont know what to do anymore so im leaving them up to you lord,
Here are my problems i now lay them down
Your the only one that can help
your the only one who's never left or betray me
you've always been around
And your the one i know will never leave
you are my savior the only one i'll ever need
my problems are which blind me
I'm taking your hand and im ready now,
Take the lead and father please guide me to where i need to be.
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Date Submitted: Jul 09, 2008 (01:29 PM)
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  Zanay
07/16/09 (01:02 PM) 
Most people would shy away from religion in their poems. You captured it tho. Nice

  K.C.Colt
03/25/09 (12:40 PM) 
Wonderful,wonderful piece! I can feel the seriousness of this piece and the depth of it come up from very soul. Keep writing Babygirl and keep the faith......

  Iaintgot1
11/15/08 (05:38 PM) 
Girl this is beautiful.

  TARRIE
11/15/08 (03:47 AM) 
Amen and Amen.

  J skillz
07/11/08 (07:15 PM) 
i know that i'm connected to god when i write and so are you this is powerful keep up the good work i just said this to god last week in fact, i'm saying it now...

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