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"Taken #2 (String of Haikus)"
  by InFamouZ1


Taken you let me
Fall... So long so hard your wrong
Never again though

You said that you would
But you didn't so I can't
Trust your word so bye

I aint wrong but you
Are thanks for the many lies
You put in my eyes

Taken Taken Take-
-N what you filled me with take-
-N taken taken

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Date Submitted: Dec 05, 2007 (03:14 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (2)
  MsKitty25
12/16/07 (02:00 AM) 
Wow! Dat's real deep and touching. I can relate honestly! Nice write sweetie feeling the hurt....

  E Merk
12/09/07 (09:28 PM) 
i think it is really creative it kinda short but that doesnt matter you made your point and got the message across i liked keep doin your thing

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