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"Talented"
  by iva


I can write a poem
you can paint a picture
them over there
play instruments
perhaps we'll be
house niggers
someday
The smog of brooklyn
the palm tree dream
come true
the hudson river
the ocean clear
and blue
red brick grafitti
a finger in the sand
the gun
the pen
the child
the man
Naked thought
in a fancy cloth world
less than moral
antisocial is I
go on pen
scream on pen
for I
Grass and toes
see how they match
bluejay captured again
with chalk on black paper
it will fade away later
such is life
I can write the words
fashion them to rhyme
Im so talented
in these crucial times
perhaps I'll be house nigger
one day
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Date Submitted: Sep 17, 2009 (05:13 PM)
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  Lady_Style
11/02/09 (05:15 AM) 
A deep write that sure does ooze talent...very nicely penned!

  Μz Ρ...
10/11/09 (08:08 AM) 
wonderful piece o poetry ...love the word play use xx

  me-me
09/26/09 (12:43 PM) 
deep as always when it comes to you well done and very nicely executed

  Shani. Medicin...
09/19/09 (06:58 PM) 
Excellent poetry iva. I love the way you overstand systematic slavery and the dream...American dream/illusion come true...and when you get to be a house nigger looking at field nigger I...remember to toss a bone every now and then. :)

  D Benitez
09/18/09 (11:00 AM) 
you are so so talented the message leaves me speachless, the expression is so honest and real. I feel this one Iva! "Naked thought / in a fancy cloth world/ less than moral/ antisocial is I/ go on pen / scream on pen/ for I / Grass and toes / see how they match "

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