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"Talk With Gunshot..."
  by SlimCutta


**OK..for all this internet stuff...its all kiddy and petty stuff. DO NOT...and i Repeat...DO NOT come to my inbox with stupidness cause of who i know and who im friends with...seriously...grow up and grow some. IF you cannot live your life without involving virtual reality with reality...then you need to get off GS***
MI TALK WITH GUN SHOT - VYBZ KARTEL (MAVADO DISS)

Mindsets set off on Virtual reality...
While you ignoring the sense of reality..
Speaking into existance ..
The irrelevance of words that create resistance..
This is not the writer you want to war with..
Cause words are big but gunshots are not what you wanna war with..

Talk with intelligence when entering my space..
And no i do not mean that site myspace..
Come at me correctly..
Or get put down 6 feet deep...
Corrections need to be made..
And apologies are in order...only to fade..
Fix your pen to write what you mean and what you know..
You cannot erase a message you send..so please know..
Stepping into my realm is like a level you wont ever know..
So before you reap what you sow..
Please watch what words you flow..

Catch my words precisely..
Just because im friends with them do not mean come at me slightly..
Do not involve me in internet politicking..
Nor do you bring me into your pain and sorry of hurting...
Just as my pen speaks..
I do have permits that allow me to fire off for red leaks..
Speak with caution..
Release my words with special passion...

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Date Submitted: Jul 19, 2009 (10:27 PM)
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  Coko Phantysii
08/06/09 (10:09 AM) 
this go hard...i love the flow of this...10*

  mz_April
07/23/09 (04:14 PM) 
damn tell um baby. its funny he said he was sorry too haha.

  ☸۞...
07/23/09 (02:50 AM) 
Very True and I like how u constructed it...Calm,Simple.Percise and Expressive..Not 2 mention Real 2 much emphasis is place on the shoulder's of the Pen 2 Mouth that of which should of been silent Poetry,Gs,And words in general should be excersised With more restraint and more Caution and Dignity...I can digg it my dude...Much respect On the Piece and the venting session Keep 'em coming.

  icnicn2004
07/19/09 (11:41 PM) 
Woah! Somebody sure did tick you off. You got your point across in this piece though. Step to you correct or don't step to you at all... Enough said.

  monica
07/19/09 (11:30 PM) 
OOOOOO WEEE THIS WAS SICK I LOVED IT IM FAV LINE WAS A RELEASE MY WORDS WIT SPECIAL PASSION OOO THAT WAS JUST COLD LIKE BURRR!!! LMBO AT ANY RATE THIS WAS HOT GOOD USE OF INK TEN FROM ME

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