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"TALKING TO HIM"
  by YoungZurc


SETTING- IN MY BEDROOM, STARING IN THE MIRROR

(CRUZ TALKING)

MIRROR, MIRROR ON THE WALL...
WHO'S THE REALEST OF THEM ALL???

YEAH, I'VE HEARD THE WHISPERS AS I WALK PASS...
"HE'S JUST LIKE THE REST & WILL FAIL LIKE THE LAST"

I TOLD HER I LOVED HER, BUT SHE DIDN'T BELIEVE ME...
SO I THOUGHT... HMM, IF I WROTE DOWN THE WORDS THAT'LL SEEM LESS DECIEVING...

YES, LYING IS EASY & THE TRUTH TENDS TO HURT...
BUT I HOLD MY RAP BOOK LIKE A BIBLE IN CHURCH....


CAUSE MUSIC....
2 ME...
IS A RELIGION...
I DON'T WRITE SONGS...
I WRITE TESTIMONIES ABOUT THIS LIFE THAT I'M LIVING...

RARELY ONCE BUT NEVER TWICE IS IT GIVEN...
A CHANCE TO HEAR A RAPPER THAT IS AT YOUR ARMS DISTANCE...

YES IT'S ME... AS CLOSE YOU CAN GET TO SOMETHING AS SIMULAR...
TO YOUR OWN LIFE WITHOUT BEING IN MY PERIMETER....

CAUSE I.... AM.... YOU!!!
NO NOT PHYSICALLY BUT SPRITUALLY, BECAUSE "WE" HAVE BOTH BEEN THRU...

THE SAME STRUGGLE & ALL THE COMPLICATIONS...
DIVIDED IT'S SUICIDE, BUT UNITED IT'S "FUCK THE NATION"

YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION, MOTIVATION DRAWN FROM YOU...
I'M GLAD WE HAD THIS CONVERSATION....
MORESO, THAT YOU SPOKE THE TRUTH.....


" I'M THE REALEST"
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Date Submitted: Jun 23, 2009 (09:26 PM)
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  monica
07/13/09 (03:12 AM) 
THIS WAS A HOT WRITE I LOVED IT YOU KILLED IT BT I MUST SAY IM THE REALEST LMBO JK ANT ANY RATE YOU GET TEN STARS FROM ME HANDS DOWN I KNO I REAL GOOD POET WEN I SEE ONE

  ash-ash
07/12/09 (09:10 PM) 
i love it

  Chocolate1-on-...
07/10/09 (08:50 AM) 
WONDERFUL piece right here...i love it...:) love it

  malushka
06/26/09 (04:47 PM) 
this poem is HOT like ppl say words don't express your love u got to prove it..... keep them coming hun n i would love to come back n read some more

  *~Raw Sensuali...
06/23/09 (09:51 PM) 
BRAVO... this is "the realest" shit I've read in a while... Inspirational to say the least.

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