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"Tear's Of Pain"
  by Lil' Shadow


sometimes i wonder will my life ever get better, but i see it's not going well at the moment. as i sit here in my room thinking about the good times tear's fall from my eyes each and every day i go out side. i'm just wondering do i belongs here or should i give up because i feel not wanted in this life see i stayed true to my life but now look at how people treat me see i guess i have to stand up and keep searching i know some people saying why let this bother u but i try not but i continue to walk this path of tear's i'm just wondering will this pain stop or will it keep going i know this one is short but i will write more.
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Date Submitted: Dec 30, 2007 (07:25 PM)
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  loyaltyb6
09/13/08 (09:05 PM) 
PAIN IS LIFE AND LIFE IS ONE BIG LESSON I CAN RELATE TO THE WORDS PUT DOWN IN THIS CHECK OUT 2 OF MY FAVS ON MY PAGE....TRUE STORY AND PAIN IN MY LIFE

  gigglz
05/06/08 (01:53 PM) 
yo it may be short but i feel you i know wat its like to just be cryin tryi n to deal with the pain that u go through and wondering if it will ever stop you bro i feel you and in the end no matter wat u go through life works out and it makes u stronger

  lovely Lil Kie...
04/01/08 (02:08 AM) 
I can relate. I'm going through the same right now,and have in the past. It gets better, but you'll always have rough patches. Nice write

  baby girl oo7
03/28/08 (04:41 PM) 
I CAN RELATE TO THIS SOMETIMES YOU WONDER WHEN WILL ALL THIS SADNESS END. I UNDERSTAND I USED TO THINK THAT AT TIMES BUT ALL U CAN DO IS PICK YOUR HEAD UP AND KEEP IT MOVIN ONE DAY ALL YOU TROUBLES WILL BE GONE

  MRS. CREATIVEL...
02/12/08 (03:02 AM) 
YEAH IT WAS SORT BUT I COULD SEE THAT THIS WAS STRIAGHT PAIN A JUST TORN IN TWO WELL I'VE ALWAYS BEEN TOLD GOOD THINGS COME TO THOSE WHO WAIT THE STORM DOES NOT LAST ALWAYS PEACE & BLESSINGS HUN

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